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2025年春季学期，我国多地中小学将课间休息时间延长至15分钟。在课间“快乐一刻”期间，你校进行了形式多样、内容丰富的体育活动。请根据下面的要点提示，以“The 15-minute Break”为题目，给某英文报“校园体育”栏目投稿。

要点提示：

写作要求：

1. 必须包括所有要点并作适当补充。

2. 字数在100字左右。

3. 参考词汇：jump rope (跳绳)

The 15-minute Break

Our school has made a great change in the inter-class break. It is longer, from 10 to 15 minutes.
The purpose is to give students more time to rest and do activities that can help us grow better. There are many different kinds of activities for us like basketball, volleyball, running, and jump rope. Many students are interested in these activities which are good for us. First, taking part in the physical activities can help us reduce stress so that we feel more energetic for the next class. Second, during these activities, we can make more friends and learn from each other.
In a word, the 15-minute inter-class break makes our school life more colorful and meaningful. We can really enjoy the break!

[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据提示要点进行写作，可适当增添细节，注意行文连贯并突出重点。

[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍课间休息时间的变化；
第二步，介绍变化的目的、活动及带来的好处；
第三步，进行总结。

[亮点词汇]
①many different kinds of 许多不同种类的
②be interested in 对……感兴趣
③take part in 参加

[高分句型]
①Many students are interested in these activities which are good for us. (which引导定语从句)
②First, taking part in the physical activities can help us reduce stress so that we feel more energetic for the next class. (so that引导目的状语从句)

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榜样的力量是无穷的。核潜艇之父黄旭华、潜心研究AI的梁文锋、机器人之父王兴兴、弃医从艺的饺子、遨游太空的女工程师王浩泽等都是青少年的榜样。成长的过程中，每个人都有自己的榜样。学校英文报正在开展以“My Role Model”为主题的征文活动。请根据下列提示谈谈你心中的楷模并分享你的体会。

要点提示：

1. Who is your role model?   

2. Why is he/she your model?

3. What can you learn from him/her?

写作要求：

1. 要点齐全，并适当发挥；

2. 文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；

3. 90词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

My Role Model

Everyone has a role model, so do I. My role model is Huang Xuhua, known as the “Father of China’s Nuclear Submarines”.
I admire him because he spent over 30 years working secretly on submarines without telling his family. Even when facing technical difficulties, he never gave up. What touches me most is that he once said, “I’m willing to be silent for the country’s future.” His words show his deep love for our nation.
From him, I’ve learned two important things. First, we should be brave enough to face challenges, just as he did during research. Second, we must always put the country’s needs first. Whenever I feel tired in study, I think of his spirit and keep going.

[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要是“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意要点齐全，可适当拓展，并突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。用“我的榜样是黄旭华”引出下文。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。表明我把他当作榜样的原因。
第三步，书写结语。表明我可以从他身上学到什么，进行情感升华。

[亮点词汇]
①admire 仰慕
②give up 放弃
③brave 勇敢的

[高分句型]
What touches me most is that he once said, “I’m willing to be silent for the country’s future.” (that引导宾语从句)

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随着国家“体重管理年”三年行动计划的启动，“体重管理”成为社交平台上的热词。目前，学校英文报正在开展以The Importance of Controlling a Healthy Weight为题的讨论。请用英语写一篇短文投稿。

内容包括：

1. 体重管理的意义；

2. 分享个人关于体重管理的经历和看法；

3. 描述学校为学生管理体重开展的活动；

4. 你的建议。

注意事项：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；

3. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。

The Importance of Controlling a Healthy Weight

With the start of the national “Weight Management Year” plan, “weight management” has become a hot topic on social media. Maintaining a healthy weight is of great significance. It not only helps us look good but also keeps our body in a healthy state, reducing the risk of various diseases.
Personally, I once struggled with my weight. I felt tired easily and lacked confidence. Then I started to eat a balanced diet and exercise regularly. Gradually, I lost some weight and became more energetic.
Our school has also taken action. It offers special P.E. classes focusing on weight management and provides healthy meal options in the cafeteria.
To better manage weight, I suggest schools organize more outdoor activities. Also, we students should raise awareness and take the initiative to control our weight for a better life.

[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。

[写作步骤]
第一步，按题目要求说明管理体重的意义。
第二步，分享个人关于体重管理的经历和看法。
第三步，描述学校为学生管理体重开展的活动并谈谈自己的建议。

[亮点词汇]
①struggled with 和……作斗争
②balanced diet 均衡的饮食
③taken action 采取行动

[高分句型]
①It not only helps us look good but also keeps our body in a healthy state, reducing the risk of various diseases.（现在分词作状语）
②To better manage weight, I suggest schools organize more outdoor activities.（动词不定式作目的状语）

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体育运动在我们生活中非常重要。2025年中考体育考试也即将来临，你的班级准备开展以“体育运动”为主题的英语班会。作为班长，请你根据以下要点提示，为此次班会写一篇英文发言稿。

要点：

1. 运动在日常生活中的重要性；

2. 这三年中你在运动方面是怎么做的；

3. 这三年中你在运动方面的收获和感悟；

4. 为同学们加油打气。

要求：

1. 包含以上所有提示要点，可适当发挥；

2. 语句通顺、语意连贯、语法正确；

3. 词数不少于80词（发言稿的开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

Dear classmates,
The physical exam for the entrance to the senior high school is coming. As we know, sports are very important in our life. Through exercise, we can become much healthier. I’ve been running for 30 minutes every afternoon for three years. At the beginning, I felt very tired after running and even couldn’t breathe. But after a day’s study, running can make me happy and smart. So I keep running every day. And I’m very good at sports now.
Let’s do some exercise together! I believe we can all pass the physical exam smoothly and this will be a good start for our future study and life.

[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，考生应围绕“运动在日常生活中的重要性、个人运动实践、运动收获与感悟、为同学加油打气”四个方面展开，确保不遗漏任何要点，并适当添加细节以丰富内容。

[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。通过提及“中考体育考试即将来临”这一背景，引出“体育运动”这一主题，并简要概述发言的主要内容。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。运动在日常生活中的重要性：强调运动对身体健康、心理调适及社交互动的积极作用；个人运动实践：分享过去三年中，自己在运动方面的具体行动，如参与的体育活动、坚持的运动习惯等；运动收获与感悟：讲述通过运动，自己在身体、心理或精神层面所获得的成长与变化，以及从中学到的宝贵经验；为同学加油打气：以积极向上的态度，鼓励同学们面对即将到来的体育考试，强调坚持与努力的重要性；
第三步，书写结语。总结发言要点，再次强调运动的价值，并表达对同学们的美好祝愿。

[亮点词汇]
① be important in 在……中很重要
② become much healthier 变得更加健康
③ at the beginning 起初
④ be good at 擅长
⑤ pass the physical exam 通过体检

[高分句型]
I believe we can all pass the physical exam smoothly and this will be a good start for our future study and life.（宾语从句 ）

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今年秋天，中国将在天津主办上合组织峰会 (Shanghai Cooperation Organization Summit, 简称SCO Summit)。这是全市人民的荣耀，更是全市人民的责任。假设你校将举行一次演讲比赛，主题为“让世界从这里认识天津”。请根据这一主题和以下提示，用英文写一篇演讲稿宣传天津并发出倡议。

参考词汇：

小洋楼 Western-style house； 小吃 snack； 十大港口 top ten ports

要求：

1)词数：80~100词。

2)短文的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。

3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

Dear friends,
This autumn, China will host the SCO Summit in Tianjin, which is a great honor for all of us and fills us with pride. Tianjin is a city with over 600 years of history. It has both ancient buildings and Western-style houses. Tianjin is famous for its food. Visitors especially enjoy trying the local snacks and breakfast. There are many parks for people to exercise and play. Tianjin Port is one of the top ten ports in the world. It is always busy. People in Tianjin are friendly and helpful.
As students, we should be polite and welcoming. Let’s show our best to the world. We should also keep our city clean and beautiful. Let’s make Tianjin a better place for everyone.
Thank you for your listening.

[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿。
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。
③提示：根据要点写作。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。

[写作步骤]
第一步：承接给出的开头，详细介绍天津，包括天津的历史、美食、基础设施和当地的人等；
第二步：呼吁大家要有礼貌并保持城市清洁；
第三步：承接给出的结尾。

[亮点词汇]
①with over 600 years of history有600多年的历史
②one of the top ten ports十大港口之一
③keep our city clean保持城市清洁

[高分句型]
①There are many parks for people to exercise and play. (There be句型)
②Let’s make Tianjin a better place for everyone. (祈使句)

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